This is just further proof that it’s all about how you market yourself—the right words are everything.
I’ll take your feedback, make any revisions, and come back to you with a lightening bolt of a final draft.
Pretend you’re the person who’s reading your profile. Is it more intriguing to date someone who says he/she likes “to try new things” or who “once ate jellyfish in China”?
When stumped with coming up for a story for one of your adjectives, like “thoughtful,” just think of the best/most memorable/most unique things you did for exes.
He had typed very little, and what he did type didn’t sound like the version of him that I knew in person.